I am not sure how many “leads” I have read in my life, but it has got to
be a bunch. The surprising thing is that I had no idea how many different ways
they can be written. I know in the future I will pay more attention to the lead
and how it was written. Below is a lead that I found while doing the other
assignment due this week.
The following lead is an example of Anecdotal because it is a soft lead
and talks about Mary Kennedy Thompson and shares some personal experiences
about her life. Also this paragraph gives good information about the story and
about Mary Kennedy Thompson. The lead takes a story telling approach to the
story.
“When Mr. Rooter president Mary Kennedy Thompson compares the
opening of her first franchise to jumping out of a plane, she’s speaking from
experience. While a member of the ROTC program at the University of Texas at
Austin, She graduated from Airborne School in 1982 one of only a handful of
women at the time to have done so.” (A Big Leap, 2014) .
This is a soft lead and a bit wordy, but I feel like it took
the time to give the reader the information they need and also impart the
desire to complete the article.
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